STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

["Hu, Yu" <yuhu AT bnl.gov>]

Dear Hanna, and All,

Sorry for the late reply, thanks for the comments.  Please find the modified proceeding from the link below:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM23_proceeding_STAR_pLambda_dLambda_CF_YuHu_v2.pdf

Thank you.

Best,

Yu

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Dear Yu,

Thank you very much. Your proceedings look to me very good. 

Linę 46: I suggest to substitute spin-averaged ->  effective

Line 47: correlation -> correlations; can’t -> cannot

Figurę 1: Please increase the fonts size for the description of  x and y axis, STAR preliminary, \Chi^2/ndf = …

Figure 2: Please increase the fonts size for the description of  x and y axis, STAR preliminary

Figure 3; please increase the fonts size for the legend (right figure)

Linę 97: spin-averaged -> effective

With thrive implemented, I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

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Wiadomość napisana przez Hu, Yu <yuhu AT bnl.gov> w dniu 27.11.2023, o godz. 20:35:

Dear Hanna,

Sure, please find the updated proceeding with the line number from the same link.

Thank you.

Best,

Yu

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Dear Yu,

Can you add line numbers?

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

Address:

Warsaw University of Technology

Faculty of Physics

Nuclear Physics Division

Koszykowa 75

Office: 117b (via 115)

00-662 Warsaw, Poland

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Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Yu Hu (yuhu AT bnl.gov) has submitted a material for a review, please have a  
look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/66059

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