STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Hello Anna,

I don't understand why you wrote just above the title "Article", I thought it was conference proceedings. Also, the contribution's length and shape fits the article better than the proceedings.. Please comment on this.

Your font sizes at all figures are very small. Increase fonts or figures, please. Make all fonts on the plots at least at the font sizes from your text. 

Section 2.1. You put p_T,1 and p_T,2 in bold font, while other vectors? are not indicated like this. Please make them consistent. 

Line 114: fxtMult replace with math mode (or italic). The same in the description of Fig. 1.

Figure 2: dE/dx in math mode.

Line 169: put the reference to the Barlow test.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

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