STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Nu Xu <nxu AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Daniel and All,

Here are my suggestions/comments about the proceedings:

1) Title: Since it is an experimental report, I suggest change the title as 
“Pion Interferometry from \sqrt(s_{NN} - 200 GeV Au+Au Collisions at STAR”. I 
also do not really understand what does it mean by 'Levy-stable sources’.

2) Somewhere, we need to make it clear about acceptance of pions used in the 
analysis. For example, “identified both positive and negative pion pairs,  
from |y|<0.5 and 0.15<p_T (GeV/c) <1.0, are used to construct the 
one-dimensional correlation function.” or something like that;

3) In Fig. 1, the x-axis variable is “Q (GeV/c), but in Eqs. (1), (3), (4) 
and (5) the variable is “q”. Let us define the variable clearly in the text 
and use it consistently;

4) Fig. 3 and Fig. 4 contain the same experimental information. I suggest 
remove Fig. 3;

That is all for now.

Best regards,
Nu



> On Jan 4, 2024, at 4:51 AM, Kincses Dániel via Star-cf-l 
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> Dear All,
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> I have prepared a proceedings contribution to ISMD2023; please find the 
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> Any comments or suggestions would be welcome,
> Thanks,
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