STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Nu Xu <nxu AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Anna and All,

Here are my comments/suggestions about this poster:
1) left panel - STAR FXT setup figure: (i) in the second bullet, the number 
‘200.7 cm’ is inconsistent with the number ‘2.01m’. I suggest use the same 
number; 
(ii) The 3rd bullet should be part of the 2nd bullet;
(iii) add an additional bullet: “The FXT setup provides a full rapidity 
coverage for identified charged pions from the 3.0 GeV Au+Au collisions, .” 

2) right panel - the equation: the terms N, lambda and K(q) are not defined. 
I suggest define these terms and remove the last sentence starting ’The other 
cross term …’. 

3) Results figure: add vertical dashed lines at qs = 0 and horizontal dashed 
lines are C(q) = 1;

4) Last figure:   add vertical dashed lines at y_cm - y_pair = 0 and 
horizontal lines are R^2_out-long = 0.

With these changes, I sign off.

Best regards,
Nu


> On Jan 11, 2024, at 1:51 PM, Anna Kraeva via Star-cf-l 
> <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> 
> Dear Hanna,
> 
> Thank you for your comments. I have added a figure with correlation 
> functions and more detailed information about mixed components. Please have 
> a look: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/66360
> 
> Thank you,
> Anna
> 
> чт, 11 янв. 2024 г. в 16:11, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l 
> <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>:
> Dear Anna,
> 
> Your poster looks good to me. 
> 
> I have 2 comments:
> 1. It would be good to show the example of the correlation function with 
> the fit (projections).
> 2. As single, out, side, and long components can be easily interpreted, I 
> suggest discussing mixed components (why they are introduced, why only 
> out-long, not all are considered). Simple cartoons and / or more detailed 
> information, except for single statements in the Summary part, would help.
> 
> With these implemented, I sign off. 
> 
> Thanks,
> Hanna
> 
> Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk
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