STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Nu Xu <nxu AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Vinh and All,

Here are my suggestions/questions for your poster:
1) Abstract -  first sentence: replace ‘for the models of heavy ion 
collisions.’ by “for model calculations.”;

2) Introduction: the parameter ‘lambda’ should be defined;

3) Results on k_T, collision energy and y_pair-dependences: (i) move the 
Collision Energy dependence to the left, then y-dependence (middle) and k_t 
dependence (right); 
(ii) It will be easier for readers if we use the same symbols for pion- and 
pion+ pairs for all of the three figures; 
(iii) For the rapidity dependence figure, I can understand y_cm stands for 
the pion rapidity in center-of-mass frame. I am not sure about ‘y_cm - 
y_pair’. I would suggest we use “Pion Rapidity y_cm” for this figure;
(iv) I would also suggest rearrange the figures as: (left) Radii vs. y_cm; 
(middle) lambda vs. y_cm; (right) R^2_out-long vs. y_cm. Put the y-axis label 
on the left of each plot;

4) Collision Energy Dependence - 1st bullet: I am not sure that we can 
conclude “Shape of pion source changes from oblate to prolate.”, remove it;

5) k_T Dependence - 2nd bullet: What do we mean by 'due to asymmetric 
acceptance w.r.t. midrapidity’? Do we mean pion acceptance?

6) For the rapidity dependence, why there is a gap in rapidity in the 3.9 GeV 
Au+Au collisions? 

7) For uncertainties, do we have both statistical and systematic 
uncertainties or only the statistical uncertainties? Please make it clear in 
the captions of result plots;

8) Add dashed line in the upper panels of the Two-pion correlation functions 
figure.

With those implemented, I sign off.

Best regards,
Nu


> On Jan 16, 2024, at 11:55 PM, Vinh Luong via Star-cf-l 
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> Dear Conveners,
> 
> Could you please kindly have a look at this poster?
> Thank you very much in advance!
> 
> Best regards,
> Vinh
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>> Vinh Luong (lbavinh AT gmail.com) has submitted a material for a review, 
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