STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Nu Xu <nxu AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Bijun, Li’Ang and All,

Thank you for the combined abstract on Kaon femtoscopy.
Here are my suggestions:

1) As Hanna has already pointed out, one author name on the abstract, 
according to STAR’s tradition;

2) Title: Change to something like “Measurements of Kaon Femtoscopy in Au+Au 
Collisions at the High Baryon Density Region” or “Measurements of Two-Kaon 
Correlation Function in Au+Au Collisions at the High Baryon Density Region”. 
The meaning of  ’two-Kaon correlation function’ and “kaon femtoscopy’ are 
similar.

3) line 4: ‘measurement’ ==> “measurements”;

4) line 4-7: perhaps we can rearrange these two sentences as: “Comparing to 
that of pions, Kaons are less affected by resonance decays and have smaller 
hadronic cross-sections, they could provide a more direct view of the 
particle-emitting source. It is particularly interesting to study the energy 
dependence of the extracted Kaon source parameters. “;

5) line 11: ‘measurements at the high baryon density region involving 
strangeness.’  ==> “measurements of correlation functions involving 
strangeness at the high baryon region.”;

6) line 13: add “calculations” at the end of the sentence.


With these are implemented, I sign off. 

Best regards,
Nu

> On Jan 24, 2024, at 6:57 AM, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l 
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> Dear Li’Ang,
> 
> Since the speaker is already decided for CPOD, please mention just one 
> author in your abstract.
> 
> Thanks,
> Hanna
> 
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