STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Li’Ang,

Thank you for the update.

I have couple more comments to implement:

Slide 3:

Define R_G.

Green frame: P(\vec{p}) describes the probability of measuring the particle with momentum vec{p},

P(\vec{p_a})P(\vec{p_b}) describes probability of observing particles a and b with given momenta independently

P(\vec{p_a}, \vec{p_b})  describes probability of observing particles a and b with given momenta simultaneously

Slide 4:

Do not forget to define all symbols mentioned here (it helps if you prepare 2 separate slides instead of this one)

With those implemented, I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

Prof. Hanna Zbroszczyk, PhD, DSc, Eng.

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl
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Dear Hanna,

Thanks very much for you suggestions. I have implement them, and please found the new version slides in below link:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/CPOD2024_KaonHBT_LiAngZhang_v4.pdf

Best Regards,

Li'Ang

 

 

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From:  "STAR Correlations andFluctuation"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Fri, May 10, 2024 05:58 AM

To:  "STAR Correlations andFluctuation"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Cc:  "Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk"<hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>;

Subject:  Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Liang Zhang for CPOD 2024 submitted for review

 

Dear Li’Ang,

Please find below comments to your slides:

Slide 2: 3.5 3.9  -> 3.5, 3.9

Slide 3: top-left figure: FSI -> FSI +QS (as in case of identical particles correlations exist due to FSI and quantum statistics as well (Bose-Einstein in the case of bosons).

Top-centered figure: I don’t get why you highlight just part of the correlation function, if you want to underline the  presence of the correlation effect, you should make the rectangle bigger, indicating the whole correlation effect (q_{inv} unto 0.15 GeV/c, hight up to 2).

Define what you mean by R_G.

The formula for k* as you present is valid only in case of particles with identical masses, make it clear please.

Green frame: clarify what do you mean by probability (probability of what)

Slide 4:

Top-left frame: define all symbols mentioned here

Top frame: define all symbols here as well,

Kaon -> kaon

Slide 6:

for 3.5 GeV -> for \sqrt{s_{NN}} = 3.5 GeV

Slide 8:

You should not show numerator and denominator of the correlation function from data if they are not labelled as „STAR preliminary”, remove both figures.

Slide 9:

The same comment applies here, remove figures with data without STAR preliminary labels. (Both slides: 8 and 9 you can insert instead figures counting model calculations).

Slide 12: replace new figure, add physics message learned from these results

Slide 13: replace new figure

Slide 15: Kaon -> kaon (twice).

Kind regards,

Hanna

  

Prof. Hanna Zbroszczyk, PhD, DSc, Eng.

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl
Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

Address:
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Faculty of Physics
Nuclear Physics Division
Koszykowa 75
Office: 117b (via 115)
00-662 Warsaw, Poland

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