STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Siyuan,

Please find below my comments to your abstract:

In general, it would be helpful to specify exactly what you plan to present: which system, and which dataset (collision and energy), you are analyzing.

.. and some wording: 

L1-2: In nuclear collisions at RHIC energies the anti-hyperon to hyperon ratios are below unity, significantly below unity at the BES II energy region in particular -> In nuclear collisions at RHIC energies, the anti-hyperon to hyperon ratios are below unity, particularly at BES II energies. 

L4-6: The dynamics of the baryon transport have been a subject of interest in recent years. It has been hypothesized that a multi-gluon configuration, the gluon junction, may be the carrier of the baryon quantum number in protons and neutrons.. -> Recent interest has focused on the dynamics of baryon number transport, with a hypothesis suggesting that multi-gluon configurations, like gluon junctions, may carry baryon numbers in protons and neutrons. 

L6-8: , and interactions -> These interactions

Kind regards,

Hanna

Prof. Hanna Zbroszczyk, PhD, DSc, Eng.

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