STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

["高一宁" <24110200006 AT m.fudan.edu.cn>]

Dear Hanna,

    Yes, both the previous version "QM2025abstract_v0.pdf" and the revised version "QM2025abstract.pdf" are included in this link: "https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2025/Collision-energy-dependence-mean-transverse-momentum-fluctuations--0" or in this link: "https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69783".

Following is Nu's comment on the previous edition: "(1) line 5:  'quark-gluon plasma properties' ==> "properties of the hot and dense medium"; (2) line 7: 'QGP initial source' ==> "initial source"; (3) line 13: replace "QGP" by "hot medium" and remove the word 'generic'." 

Thanks,

Best regards,

Yining.

 

 

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From:  "Hanna Zbroszczyk via star-cf-l Mailing List"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Mon, Nov 11, 2024 05:08 AM

To:  "star-cf-l"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  Re: [[Star-cf-l] ] [[Star-cf-I]] STAR presentation by Yining Gao for Quark Matter 2025 got commented by Nu

 

Hi Yining,

Can you post which modifications you implemented? I can not find the original email / comment?…

Thanks,

Kind regards,

Hanna

Prof. Hanna Zbroszczyk, PhD, DSc, Eng.

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl
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Wiadomość napisana przez 高一宁 (via star-cf-l Mailing List) <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 10.11.2024, o godz. 14:18:

Dear Nu,

    Thanks for your comments, I have submitted modified version to Drupal and here is the Link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/69783.

Best regards,

Yining