STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Bappa,

Please find below my comments to your nice draft:

S2 I suggest to replace top-left figure by the original one from the cited reference: https://arxiv.org/pdf/2101.09210

There is a clear message that the region described by \mu_B/3 <3 is excluded from the searches of the CP

To make better visible how changing the collision energy one can explore various areas of the QCD phase diagram, you could also show the phase diagram adapted for STAR and entire BES program (will be helpful for S4)

S6: mentioning what you account for systematic uncertainties and which effects contribute the most will help to understand these numbers

S7 and the following : each figure that shows data shown on/after CPOD 2024, instead of labeling STAR preliminary mention as CPOD 2024. STAR never planned to release these results as preliminary. 

S9: do not -> does not

S11: I suggest to remove the acknowledgement section, this talk will be given for the STAR Collaboration.

With those implemented, I sign off,

Thanks,

Hanna

Prof. Hanna Zbroszczyk, PhD, DSc, Eng.

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Wiadomość napisana przez bmondal <bmondal AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> w dniu 02.01.2025, o godz. 16:58:

On 2025-01-02 21:12, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov wrote:

Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
Nu Xu ( nxu AT lbl.gov ) has commented on a material originally submitted by
Bappaditya Mondal ( bappaditya.mondal AT niser.ac.in ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/10th-Asian-Triangle-Heavy-Ion-Conference-ATHIC-2025/Precision-measurement-Net-proton-0
Comment:
slide 11 - up-right box - last bullet: I would suggest replace it by
"Information of high moment of protons at larger baryon density or lower
collision energy is needed in order to pin down the possible existence of the
QCD critical point." We should not rely on theory for such search in my view.
After this suggestion is implemented, I sign off.
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Dear Nu,

Thank you so much for your comment. Please find the updated slides attached here.
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/70530

Thanks and regards
Bappa