STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Jiangyong Jia <jiangyong.jia AT stonybrook.edu>]

Hi, xiaoyu,

Here is my comments for sign off

cheers,

Jiangyong

P1: please add "for the STAR Collaboration" and only keep your name

P2: For outline consider avoiding technical terms such as "nMIP" and StEpdFastSim in

P4: I would swap the order the two sub-bullet of the nMIP

P5: Fit to extract "the probability of 1-2..k-MIP events" in bin j

P6: please indicate the AuAu 27 GeV on this figure and also other figures where appropriate.

resolution correction --> correct for the event plane resolution

P7: StEpdFastSim--> EPD fast simulation

same format as in the STAR offline data.

a random point on the tile--> do you mean the center of the tile?

P8: ring one--> the inner-most ring

 to correct for the measurement-->to account for residual detector effects

The plots have been symmetrized around y=0, if so please indicate that

P10: please add some statement on this slide

Plots on P8-P10 should have proper x- and y-axis labels

P11: we developed a new method

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