STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

["Hu, Yu" <yuhu AT bnl.gov>]

Dear Shinlchi, and Jiangyong,

Thanks for all the comments. 

I tried to rearrange all the boxed, index and colours. I also reduce almost all the text and try to make it looks more readable.

Please find the new version of my poster from the link below:

 https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/AUM_2020_Poster_YuHu_Isobar_blind_analysis_v2.pdf

Please let me know if you like this.

Best,

Yu

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From: Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> on behalf of ShinIchi Esumi via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
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Dear Yu
I would sign off your nice poster with a few more comments.

You have numbers in yellow boxes 1 ~ 7 and bling analysis steps I ~ IV, and
some more additional materials in blue boxes A ~ C, where the order could
be a little more organized to make it more easier for the readers to follow?

You use a similar plots as a function of run number or run index in various places,
could it be combined in one place to show/explain them together what the main
feature/aim of the analysis in different steps are.

A general run/time dependent correction can be applied in step-II used mixed
data, while I would like to see how the species dependent correction would be
applied in step-III, especially since one might start to see much finer run/time
dependence only after separating the dataset between beam species. 

Best regards, ShinIchi

> On Oct 18, 2020, at 9:30, Jiangyong Jia via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> Hi, Yu,
>
> In general, I would reduce the amount of the text and Figure, otherwise
> the poster looks very busy.
>
> Here is my comments for sign off
>
> Jiangyong
>
> the latter of which --> the latter
> background conditions-->background contributions
>
> It would be good to add a reference for Fig.2
> AMPT calculations indicate at 80% background level,-->Assuming 80%
> background, AMPT calculations indicate
>
> No need to give details about STAR detector. Just say "This measurements
> are carried out using various subsystems of the STAR detector, including..."
>
> The mock data challenge--> We use the 27 GeV Au+Au data, also collected
> in 2018, to develop the machinery and tools used for the blind procedure.
>
> use the frozen analysis code analyses the data --> the data is analyzed
> using the frozen analysis code.
>
> No additional work is needs and allowed --> Ideally, no additional
> analysis work is required for the publication.
>
>
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