STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Ding,
  I only have a few following comments on your nice slides -- with these 
included I sign off your talk:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/1030_2020_dchen_DNP_ver2.pdf

slide#3:
"does the φ-meson dv1/dy has" --> "does the φ-meson dv1/dy have"

slide#4:
"to scan low collision energies" -->
"to scan the region of low collision energies"
or
"to scan a range of low collision energies"

slide#9:
"collider mode (COL) 7.7"
-->
"collider mode (COL) 7.7 GeV"

slide#9: Needs citations for the published data. Please put a reference 
to the STAR published paper.

Best,
Prithwish


On 2020-10-21 14:29, Ding Chen via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Dear ShinIchi,
>
> Please find my preliminary plots in the following link:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/blog/dchen/preliminary-plots-dchen-dnp-2020
>
> Best regards,
> Ding
>
> On Sun, Oct 18, 2020 at 12:39 AM ShinIchi Esumi via Star-fcv-l
> <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Dear Ding
> > I would also sign off your nice talk, after you prepare the
> > preliminary summary page
> > with all your preliminary plots to be linked at special drupal area
> > for the preliminary location
> > with necessary information at :
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/pwg/bulk-correlations/bulkcorr-preliminary-summary
> > then I would approve your talk.
> > Best regards, ShinIchi
> >
> > Hi, Ding,
> >
> > Here is my comments for sign off.
> > Jiangyong
> >
> > P1: for the STAR..
> >
> > P2: Methods- Fixed Target (FXT) --> Fixed Target (FXT)
> >
> > P5 : is obtained from--> is estimated from mixed events
> >
> > P6: please add Y-axis title directly to the Figure.
> >
> > P6: v1Bkg: estimated with 2nd order polynomial fit
> >
> > Before P7: you should mention the v1 will need to be corrected by
> > the event plane resolution. Probably you should add one slide
> >
> > P7: please give the functional form of the fit
> >
> > P8. The Legend fonts are too small. Please increase so it is clearly
> > visible.
> >
> > On 10/15/20 8:51 AM, webmaster AT www.star.bnl.gov wrote:
> >
> > Dear Jiangyong Jia,
> >
> > Ding Chen (dchen087 AT ucr.edu) has submitted the material which needs
> > your
> > review to proceed. Please click the link below to comment on the
> > presentation:
> >
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/523
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