STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hello Prabhupada,
   Nice slides, please consider the following comments. With these I 
sign-off.

My comments are on these slides: 
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/DAE_HEP_Talk_version_2_0.pdf

slide#5 &6: Add "STAR preliminary" to the plots

Slide#6: "d(φ-Ψ)" --> "d(φ-Ψ_2)" consistently in the equation and plot.

Slide#7: "Estimated reaction plane" --> "The proxy for the reaction 
plane"

Slide#7: The equation of Resolution should be: R=\sqrt{<cos(2Ψ_A 
-2Ψ_B)>}

Slide#8: "consistent with each other." --> "consistent with each other 
within uncertainties"

Slide#10: Add reference for the published identified hadron results.

Slide#11: Add reference to AMPT model calculations.

Slide#12 or somewhere you should mention that you're showing the first 
measurement using the new EPD detector.

Best,
Prithwish



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