STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

["knayak"<knayak AT mail.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Dear Prithwish,

   Thank you very much for sign off and your comments.

I have implemented your comments and the update draft (ver2) is uploaded in the link.

 https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/52962

Please find the reply to your comments inline given below.

Thanks,

With best regards,

Kishora

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Date: Thursday, Dec 10, 2020 09:09

Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Kishora Nayak for DAE HEP2020 submitted for review

Hello Kishora,
   Your slides are already in good shapes. I sign-off with the following 
comments.

Slide#3: Add details on the sources of systematics and centrality 
determination (try to avoid STAR terminologies).
>>> Implemented

Slide#4: "Understanding initial fluctuations"
I am not sure how much we can learn about "initial fluctuations" from 
the odd v1 measurements. I would change it to:
"Understanding initial state" or "Understanding initial state in 
rapidity direction"

>>> Mofified the sentence

Slide#5: "Particle formation time are" --> "Particle formation time is"

>>> Implemented

Slide#7-10: Why did you choose to show 0.5<|y|<1.0 ?

>>> Mid rapidity (|y|<0.5) v1 vs pT is also similar but the magnitute 

is smaller than far rapidity distribution. So decided to show only one case. 

Slide#7: "Zero crossing for central (0-10%) collisions: pT~1-2 GeV/c" --> "Sign change for central (0-10%) collisions at high pT"

>>> suggestion implemented

Slide#8&9: You put many details on the thermal model -- I think you should put a comment on the results. Even saying "It predicts positive v1 at all pT" or something like that would suffice.

>>> sentence modified

Slide#10: "Shadowing (or absorption)" needs a reference.

>>> reference added

Slide#10: "in all observed" --> "at all observed"

>>> Implemented

Slide#10: "Baryon-meson dependence" --> "Baryon-meson separation"

>>> Implemented

Slide#11: "(NCQ) scaling is observed at low pT" --> "(NCQ) scaling holds best at low mT"

>>> Sentence modified

Slide#12: "low-pT" --> "low-mT" I think.

>>> Implemented

Slide#13: I would add a concise version of bullet no. 3 on slide #8 & #9 where you show the AMPT results.

>>> Sentences are modified

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