STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[ShinIchi Esumi <esumi.shinichi.gn AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp>]

Dear Maria
I would also sign off your nice abstract with some comments for you to be 
considered. You've mentioned about the high momentum vn, which sounds 
like the v2 originated from the jet quenching, is this also a part of this 
talk?, 
which is OK, but if it’s not, I would just say like “momentum-, rapidity- and 
centrality- dependence of vn”, The last sentence is almost repeating the same 
thing that was already mentioned at the end of the first paragraph, so I 
would 
combine the 1st and the 3rd paragraphs to end with the promise of data sets
and results to be shown in the 2nd paragraph. 
Best regards, ShinIchi

> On Dec 12, 2020, at 2:10, Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l 
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> 
> Hello Maria,
> Nice abstract, I sign-off with one minor comment.
> 
> line 13:
> "be also presented to study the collision energy dependence."
> -->
> "be also presented at three different collision energies"
> 
> Best,
> Prithwish
> 
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