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Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally 
 
submitted by Shengli Huang ( shengli.huang AT stonybrook.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/initial-stages-2021/measurement-v2-and-v3-pau-dau-and-3heau-collisions-sqrtsnn200-gev-

Comment:
Slide 6:
Last equation at the bottom, it is better to write the correct expression
for differential pT, something like vn(pT) = c(pT,pT-ref)/√c(pT-ref)


Slide 7:
"F" represents the jet modification for the long-range
away-side jet between"
-->
"F" represents the modification for the long-range
away-side jet between"

Slide#8 & 9:
"The v2 and v3 results are method-independent" --> "The v2 and v3 results are 
 
method-independent within systematics"

Slide#15: Please combine the two sentences:

IPGlasma+Hydro can also reproduce the v3 by including the sub-nucleon  
fluctuations.
IPGlasma+Hydro over predicts the v2 due to extra initial momentum correlation
-->
"IP-Glasma + Hydro that includes sub-nucleonic fluctuations + initial  
momentum correlation over predicts v2 but reproduces v3"


Slide# 19:
"A small system advisory committee"
-->
"A cross-experiment small system advisory committee"

Slide#19:
"Difference between measurements"
-->
"Different results
(beyond uncertainties)"

or "Difference beyond uncertainties"


Slide 21:
"weakly independent" --> "consistent"




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