STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Jie Zhao <jiezhao1119 AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Prithwish,

Thanks for your nice suggestions, we have updated the abstract below:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/SQM2021_abstract_CME_0.pdf

and reply to your suggestions below:

"Preliminary results of those measurements in Au+Au collisions
at 200 GeV have been presented at Quark Matter 2019 [2]."
-->
"Preliminary results using this approach in Au+Au and U+U collisions
have been presented at Quark Matter 2019 [2]."

done

"In this talk we will present the final results, where the systematic uncertainties have been thoroughly investigated,"
-->
"In this talk we present the latest results where the systematic uncertainties have been thoroughly investigated"

"latest results" sounds like we are going to present a second preliminary results, the results are at the stage of collaboration review, thus we would prefer to use the previous text

Thanks and Best regards!

Jie

On Mar 1, 2021, at 9:52 PM, Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hello Jie,
 Your first SQM abstract on CME is very similar to what you submitted at the initial stages.
 https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/SQM2021_abstract_CME.pdf

I sign-off with a few minor comments:

"Preliminary results of those measurements in Au+Au collisions
at 200 GeV have been presented at Quark Matter 2019 [2]."
-->
"Preliminary results using this approach in Au+Au and U+U collisions
have been presented at Quark Matter 2019 [2]."

"In this talk we will present the final results, where the systematic uncertainties have been thoroughly investigated,"
-->
"In this talk we present the latest results where the systematic uncertainties have been thoroughly investigated"


Best,
Prithwish

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please have a look:
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