STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

["knayak"<knayak AT mail.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Dear JIangyong,

Thank you very much for your comments and approving the proceeding.

I have implemented all of your comments and the updated draft (ver2.pdf) is uploaded in the following 

link.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/53952

Thanks,

With best regards,

Kishora

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Sender: Jiangyong Jia via Star-fcv-l<star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>

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Date: Monday, Mar 8, 2021 09:22

Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Kishora Nayak for DAE HEP2020 submitted for review

I only have a few comments on your proceedings.

adding line numbers would help commenting
1) I would not put references in the abstract.
2) shows the ->shows that the
3) energy dependence -> energy dependences
4) have a minimum->reach a minimum
5) EOS -->  the EOS

section 2:
6) AMPT-Default and AMPT-SM need to be defined.
7) Does not hold good --> does not hold well
8) the magnitude violation--> the magnitude of the violation
JIangyong
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