STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Niseem <niseemmagdy AT yahoo.com>]

Hi Prithwish,

Please see the updated abstract at the same link.

Also my response to your points in this email.

Thanks,
Niseem

On 6/5/21 4:34 PM, Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Hello Niseem,
>    Here are my comments on the abstract -- with these included I sign 
> off.
>
> Optional: You may think of editing the title to include "from STAR" or 
> "STAR results" or something like that. How about :
> "Investigations of the longitudinal broadening of two-particle 
> transverse momentum correlations from STAR"
>
> "collisions[1,2]."
> -->
> "collisions [1,2]."
>
> "investigate (i) the self-correlations associated with the
>  definition of the collision centrality (ii) the longitudinal 
> broadening of the G2 (∆η, ∆ϕ) correlator (iii) the long range 
> azimuthal dependence"
> -->
> "investigate: (i) the self-correlations associated with the
>  definition of the collision centrality, (ii) the longitudinal 
> broadening of the G2 (∆η, ∆ϕ) correlator, (iii) the long range 
> azimuthal dependence"
>
>
> It's not clear what you mean by:
> "the self-correlations associated with the definition of the collision 
> centrality"
> Can you please simplify?
>>I added reference to simplify the meaning of the self-correlations.


> "and the azimuthal harmonics of the G2 (∆η,∆ϕ) correlator "
> -->
> "and the azimuthal harmonics a_^{pT} of the G2 (∆η, ∆ϕ) correlator"
>
> "as well as simulated calculations using"
> -->
> "as well as with calculations using "
>
> " These comparisons are expected to reflect the G2 (∆η, ∆ϕ) power to 
> differentiate between theoretical models as well as constraining the 
> η/s extraction."
> -->
> "These comparisons are expected to reflect the efficacy of the G2 (∆η, 
> ∆ϕ) correlator to differentiate between theoretical models as well as 
> to constrain the η/s."
>
> Here in the last sentence "differentiate between theoretical models" 
> is ambiguous. You need to clarify which aspects of the theoretical 
> models, or which physics scenarios will be contrasted.
>> The G2 can add a constraint on the momentum current correlations in 
different models. I will prefer to do not expand this discussion in the 
abstract.


> Best,
> Prithwish
>
>
>
>
> On 2021-06-01 19:16, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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> > Niseem Magdy Abdelwahab Abdelrahman (niseemmagdy AT yahoo.com) has 
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