STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Chunjian,
  Nice slides:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/DNP_Oct_STAR_SBU_ChunjianZhang_v0.pdf

Please see my comments below. With these included, I sign-off.

slide#1:
I think it's always a great idea to spell out your institution name 
below your name. Also your name doesn't have to be written in too small 
font like you have now.

slide#2:
The right most cartoon is not "Freeze Out" its more like "Detection"

slide#2:
"pressure gradient forces" --> "pressure gradients"

slide#2:
"The shape of the size of the overlap is directly controlled by the 
shape..colliding nuclei" --> "The shape and the size of the overlap is 
controlled by the shape...colliding nuclei, most dominantly in central 
collisions."

slide#3:
In the equation of \rho(r,\theta,φ), a parenthesis ")" is missing in the 
exponential.

slide#3:
"Final Particle Flow" --> "Produced Particle Flow"

slide#3:
"Harmonic flow" --> "Anisotropic flow"

slide#4:
"is just shape" --> "is related to the shape"

slide#4:
"Harmonic flow" --> "Harmonic flow coefficient"

slide#4:
This sentence is unclear: "R_\perp is related to Y_2^0 projected to the 
transverse plane". R_\perp is related to which aspect of Y_2^0? It's 
magnitude ?

slide#4:
Equation of "R_\perp^2 = <x^2> +<y^2> =<...>" I don't understand how 
this works. The term inside <...> is dimensionless because spherical 
harmonics are dimensionless where as R, x, y are not. Something is 
missing here.

slide#4:
Please increase the font of the sentence starting with "fluctuation of 
...."

slide#5:
Much of what you write on this slide is related to search for CME. The 
sentence starting with "A precision.." is not needed for your talk. But 
please somewhere write "Isobar run originally dedicated to CME search". 
You can also refer to Sergei's talk for more details but that is 
optional.

slide#6:
"Deviate from unity from mid-central" --> "Deviate from unity in 
mid-central collisions"

slide#6:
"Request for more and finer bins" --> "Goal is to explore this in finer 
bins of multiplicity"

slide#7:
"deformation using heavy ion collisions" -->"deformation in heavy ion 
collision measurements"

slide#8:
Title "variance ratio" --> "[pT]-variance ratio"

slide#8:
"also could be used in conjunction with anisotropy" -->"could also be 
used in conjunction with anisotropic"

slide#9:
"The large difference of v_2 and v_3 suggests" --> "The large difference 
of v_2 and v_3 in central isobar collisions"

slide#9:
"[pT] fluctuations also could be used in conjunction with anisotropy 
flow on the deformation study conclusion are consistent"
-->
"[pT] fluctuations also sensitive to deformation study leads to 
consistent conclusion:"

slide#9:
"Opportunity to study on nuclear structure at a much shorter scale 
(~10^-24 s)"
-->
"Opportunity to study nuclear structure at very short time scale 
(~10^-24 s) accessible through heavy ion collisions"

slide#9:
"A lot of possibility for scan." -->"A future deformed-system scan will 
be ideal."

slide#9:
"But need to first establish the heavy ion systematics using species 
with known deformation"
-->
"Species with well known deformation will be useful to better understand 
the systematics and establish the efficacy of this approach"

Best,
Prithwish


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