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[Star-fcv-l] Comments for Xionghong He for QM22 talk from FCV conveners
- From: ShinIchi Esumi <esumi.shinichi.gn AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp>
- To: "STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG" <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
- Subject: [Star-fcv-l] Comments for Xionghong He for QM22 talk from FCV conveners
- Date: Mon, 22 Nov 2021 15:37:11 +0900
Dear Xionghong
The followings are comments on your merged talk abstract from conveners.
Best regards, Jiangyong, Prithwish and ShinIchi
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Jiangyong
Title: How about "Measurement of collective flow for light-nuclei and hyper-nuclear in Au+Au collisions from STAR"
L6 Measurements of light-nuclei and hyper-nuclei yields and collectivity provide--> The yield and collective flow of light-nuclei and hyper-nuclei are sensitive to the production mechanics and the dynamics of the late-time hadronic medium produced in high-energy nuclear collisions.
Comment: this statement is very generic. Can you state what kind of unique information and production mechanism?
L8 The results from hyper-nuclei would shed--> In particular, the production and flow of hyper-nuclei probes directly the hyperon-nucleon interactions in the high baryon density region.
L15 how about: Model comparison suggests that the dynamics of light-nuclei and hyper-nuclei are dominated by hadronic interactions.
Prithwish
L7: “underlying production mechanism” → “underlying particle production mechanism”
L8: “The results from” → “In addition, the results from”
L12: “compared with those” → “compared to those”
ShinIchi
I’m OK to sign off.
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