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Re: [Star-fcv-l] Comments for Xionghong He for QM22 talk from FCV conveners
- From: "Xionghong" <hexh AT impcas.ac.cn>
- To: "'ShinIchi Esumi'" <esumi.shinichi.gn AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp>, "'STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG'" <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
- Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] Comments for Xionghong He for QM22 talk from FCV conveners
- Date: Tue, 23 Nov 2021 08:22:42 +0800
Dear conveners,
Thank you very much for the comments. We updated the abstract accordingly and the new version can be found at the link https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/57277.
Best regards, Xionghong
发件人: star-fcv-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov [mailto:star-fcv-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov] 代表 ShinIchi Esumi via Star-fcv-l
Dear Xionghong The followings are comments on your merged talk abstract from conveners. Best regards, Jiangyong, Prithwish and ShinIchi
--------------------------------------- Jiangyong Title: How about "Measurement of collective flow for light-nuclei and hyper-nuclear in Au+Au collisions from STAR"
L6 Measurements of light-nuclei and hyper-nuclei yields and collectivity provide--> The yield and collective flow of light-nuclei and hyper-nuclei are sensitive to the production mechanics and the dynamics of the late-time hadronic medium produced in high-energy nuclear collisions.
Comment: this statement is very generic. Can you state what kind of unique information and production mechanism?
L8 The results from hyper-nuclei would shed--> In particular, the production and flow of hyper-nuclei probes directly the hyperon-nucleon interactions in the high baryon density region.
L15 how about: Model comparison suggests that the dynamics of light-nuclei and hyper-nuclei are dominated by hadronic interactions.
Prithwish L7: “underlying production mechanism” → “underlying particle production mechanism” L8: “The results from” → “In addition, the results from” L12: “compared with those” → “compared to those”
ShinIchi I’m OK to sign off. ---------------------------------------
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