STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Niseem,
  Here are my minor suggestions. With these included I sign off.

Along the line of what was suggested by Subhash, here's another way to 
fix the following line:
"... strong interaction medium a strong electro-magnetic field "
-->
"...strong interaction medium amidst a strong electro-magnetic field "

"Experimental representation of the CME involves a separation of ..."
-->
"A measurable consequence of the CME involves a separation of ..."

"CME-sensitive charge-separation observables stay inconclusive.."
-->
"CME-sensitive charge-separation measurements stay inconclusive"

"To sufficiently handle the impact of CME-signal"
-->
"To better handle the impact of CME-signal"

"predefined for the CME-sensitive observables in Ru+Ru collisions with 
the larger magnetic field over those in Zr+Zr collisions."
-->
"predefined for the CME-sensitive observables considering larger 
magnetic field in Ru+Ru collisions than in Zr+Zr collisions."

"Precision down to 0.4% is achieved, as expected,"
-->
"Precision down to 0.4% is achieved, as intended,"

Best,
Prithwish


On 2022-01-25 20:29, subhash via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Dear Niseem,
>
> Nice abstract. I am fine with the abstract. One minor suggestion:
>
> line 2: ... strong interaction medium, and a strong electromagnetic 
> field ...
>
> Thanks and regards,
> Subhash
>
>
>
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