STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Diyu and Asihk,
  Please consider the following comments. With these included we sign 
off your merged abstract.

In this line:
"directed flow of Ξ and Ω in Au+Au collisions at √sNN= 14.6, 19.6, 27 
and 200 GeV"

We are wondering if 14.6 GeV data will be ready for QM 2022. For now we 
suggest to remove "14.6" from the abstract. If it's ready we can always 
show it and publish in the proceedings.

We suggest you split the following line into two sentences and rephrase 
along the line of what is suggested below:
"The coalescence sum rule is examined with various combinations of 
hadrons where all constituent quarks are produced and it is found that 
the v1 slope for hadron combinations shows suggestive behavior when 
there is an increasing difference in the electric charge and the 
strangeness content of the associated
constituent quarks."
-->
"The coalescence sum rule is examined with various combinations of 
hadrons where all constituent quarks are produced. For such combinations 
a systematic violation of the sum rule was observed with increasing 
difference in the electric charge and the strangeness content of the 
associated
constituent quarks."


"A clear transition of ∆(dv1/dy) from positive"
Δ(dv1/dy) is not clearly defined. We suggest you modify the previous 
sentence:
"The v1 splitting between positively and negatively charged hadrons 
(π,K,p) is also studied with large statistics."
-->
"The splitting of v1 slope with rapidity (Δ(dv1/dy)) between positively 
and negatively charged hadrons (π,K,p) is also studied with large 
statistics."


"the Faraday/Coulomb effect"
-->
"the Faraday or Coulomb effect"

Best,
Jiangyong, Prithwish, Subhash


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