STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[胡晨露 <huchenlu AT impcas.ac.cn>]

Dear Prithwish,

Thank you very much for your nice comments.
I have modified my abstract and replaced it with new one.
Kindly find the updated version by the link:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/SQM-2022/Measurements-H3L-and-H4L-directed-flow-%E2%88%9A-sNN-3-GeV-AuAu-collisions-STAR

Best regards,

Chenlu

> -----原始邮件-----
> 发件人: "Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l" <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
> 发送时间: 2022-03-03 16:20:50 (星期四)
> 收件人: "STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG" <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
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> 主题: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Chenlu Hu for SQM 2022 submitted for review
> 
> Dear Chunlu,
>    The abstract looks good. Consider the following suggestions. With 
> these included, I sign off.
> 
> "So far, no measurements of collectivity for hyper-nuclei."
> ->
> "So far, the collectivity for hyper-nuclei has not been studied."
> 
> "Hyper-nuclei directed flow measurements" --> "Hyper-nuclei directed 
> flow measurements at low energies"
> 
> line 15:
> "flow v_1 from" --> "flow v_1 in"
> 
> "in  2018" --> "in the year 2018"
> 
> "copiously produced particles" --> "copiously produced light nuclei"
> 
> "coalescence process is a" --> "the coalescence of hyperons and nucleons 
> is the"
> 
> "in the collisions" --> "in these collisions"
> 
> Best,
> Prithwish
> 
> 
> 
> On 2022-02-18 11:59, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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> > 
> > Chenlu Hu (huchenlu AT impcas.ac.cn) has submitted a material for a 
> > review,
> > please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/58451
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