STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Gavin,
  The modified version is much improved. Please make the following minor 
modifications:

"may  be  sensitive  to  vorticity  and  hadronization  scenarios of the 
collision system"
-->
"may  be  sensitive  to  the vorticity  and  hadronization mechanism in 
the medium"

"not  possible  for  BES-I  data"
-->
"not  possible  with the BES-I  data"

"ten times larger than"
-->
"ten times larger than that of"

With these changes I sign off.

Best,
Prithwish



On 2022-03-05 21:41, Gavin Wilks wrote:
> Hello Subhash and Prithwish,
>
> Thank you for the comments. I took into consideration both of your
> comments and my abstract is now updated.
>
> Best,
> Gavin
>
> > On Mar 5, 2022, at 04:07, Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l 
> > <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> >
> > Dear Gavin,
> > The current version is a good start. Please include the following 
> > comments to produce a next version.
> >
> > I think the part about v_2 and v_3 is a digression and dilutes the 
> > impact of your abstract. You can mention about v_2 on line 8 but I 
> > suggest you remove it from title and rest of the abstract. This way 
> > you can present a much sharper abstract.
> >
> > line 6:
> > remove "at the center of"
> >
> > line 8:
> > I don't think I understand this line:
> > "Finite elliptic flow (v2) could affect global spin alignment by 
> > pushing more particles toward the in-plane direction; therefore, a 
> > precise measurement on centrality and transverse momentum (pT) 
> > dependent v2 will help to remove any potential bias in the 
> > measurements."
> >
> > Can you please explain why we need to mention this in the abstract?
> >
> > line 11:
> > "The Beam Energy Scan II (BES-II)" --> " The Beam Energy Scan II 
> > (BES-II) program"
> >
> > line 13:
> > "greater  statistics  for  these  collisions  at" --> "higher 
> > statistics data set for Au+Au collisions at √s_{NN}=19.6 GeV"
> >
> > Best,
> > Prithwish
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > On 2022-03-02 13:46, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > > Gavin Wilks (gwilks3 AT uic.edu) has submitted a material for a review, 
> > > please
> > > have a look:
> > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://nam04.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*2Fdrupal.star.bnl.gov*2FSTAR*2Fnode*2F58623&amp;data=04*7C01*7Cgwilks3*40groute.uic.edu*7Cefeeb361fe6740b82ee508d9fe9011d6*7Ce202cd477a564baa99e3e3b71a7c77dd*7C0*7C0*7C637820717037062456*7CUnknown*7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0*3D*7C3000&amp;sdata=9aHfpyYpLq4DGEMJvGKULeMOkwfq0tg3b7*2F1TemZFtQ*3D&amp;reserved=0__;JSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSU!!P4SdNyxKAPE!S7iguSXRLo8-alYrsRiDk676nOQqYrpPpJV04bAuJmmK40rx1PROSUwuqkrf4ULfweIycdGL$
> > > ---
> > > If you have any problems with the review process, please contact
> > > webmaster@https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://nam04.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=http*3A*2F*2Fwww.star.bnl.gov*2F&amp;data=04*7C01*7Cgwilks3*40groute.uic.edu*7Cefeeb361fe6740b82ee508d9fe9011d6*7Ce202cd477a564baa99e3e3b71a7c77dd*7C0*7C0*7C637820717037062456*7CUnknown*7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0*3D*7C3000&amp;sdata=tKXXGNJ7pc05zDEeN00yS*2BAR3Hq5z8JhMr9j4SMwuLo*3D&amp;reserved=0__;JSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUl!!P4SdNyxKAPE!S7iguSXRLo8-alYrsRiDk676nOQqYrpPpJV04bAuJmmK40rx1PROSUwuqkrf4ULfwTMMaIUE$
> > > _______________________________________________
> > > Star-fcv-l mailing list
> > > Star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://nam04.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*2Flists.bnl.gov*2Fmailman*2Flistinfo*2Fstar-fcv-l&amp;data=04*7C01*7Cgwilks3*40groute.uic.edu*7Cefeeb361fe6740b82ee508d9fe9011d6*7Ce202cd477a564baa99e3e3b71a7c77dd*7C0*7C0*7C637820717037062456*7CUnknown*7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0*3D*7C3000&amp;sdata=Qbrgp1j*2BwN*2BDPpLlDyAQEStSFeZBETFnM*2Fy8bA*2B7i4k*3D&amp;reserved=0__;JSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSU!!P4SdNyxKAPE!S7iguSXRLo8-alYrsRiDk676nOQqYrpPpJV04bAuJmmK40rx1PROSUwuqkrf4ULfwRfyZjeZ$
> > _______________________________________________
> > Star-fcv-l mailing list
> > Star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov
> > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://nam04.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*2Flists.bnl.gov*2Fmailman*2Flistinfo*2Fstar-fcv-l&amp;data=04*7C01*7Cgwilks3*40groute.uic.edu*7Cefeeb361fe6740b82ee508d9fe9011d6*7Ce202cd477a564baa99e3e3b71a7c77dd*7C0*7C0*7C637820717037062456*7CUnknown*7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0*3D*7C3000&amp;sdata=Qbrgp1j*2BwN*2BDPpLlDyAQEStSFeZBETFnM*2Fy8bA*2B7i4k*3D&amp;reserved=0__;JSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSU!!P4SdNyxKAPE!S7iguSXRLo8-alYrsRiDk676nOQqYrpPpJV04bAuJmmK40rx1PROSUwuqkrf4ULfwRfyZjeZ$