STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Declan Keane ( keane AT kent.edu ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by Xiaoyu Liu ( liu.6566 AT osu.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2022/Measurement-directed-flow-forward-and-backward-pseudorapidity

Comment:
Hi Yiaoyu, This poster is a very nice piece of work, and is already in very  
good shape.
In the directed flow box: Why use the TPC, which has poor Psi_1 resolution?   
Is it to avoid self-corr from use of EPD?  Aren't there ways to use EPD E&W  
and still avoid self-corr? A few words of explanation might help here.
Center box:  Fig. 1(a) is too small.  Magnify it by freeing-up real estate  
elsewhere on your poster.  Easiest way is make font for all text one point  
smaller, which would still be plenty big enough. That would also allow Figs.  
2 & 3 to be a bit bigger, which wouldn't hurt.
Right-side box:  write STAR preliminary.  Always cite previous STAR papers on 
 
whatever is your topic.  There are 2 STAR papers on v1 limiting frag.:
J. Adams et al., Phys. Rev. C 73, 034903 (2006).
B.I. Abelev et al., Phys. Rev. Lett. 101, 252301 (2008).
I have various suggestions on English and formatting. I'll send them to you  
directly as sticky notes on the .pdf file.

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