STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Ding,

Thanks for the update. I sign off with a few minor comments below:

By anisotropic flow do you mean v1 or, v2 or, both? You can probably 
clarify it in the abstract.

Title: If you indicate both, then you can consider: Anisotropic flows 
--> Directed and elliptic flow of ... or, Directed flow of ...
programs --> program

line 12: anisotropic flow (v1, v2) of ϕ mesons in Au+Au collisions at 
... GeV  from the second phase of RHIC ....

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2022-06-22 12:45 PM, Ding Chen wrote:
> Dear Subhash,
>
> I've updated a  version 2 in the same link according to your nice
> comments:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60017
>
> Let me know if you have any more questions or comments,
>
> Best regards,
> Ding
>
> On Tue, Jun 21, 2022 at 10:37 PM subhash via Star-fcv-l
> <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Dear Ding,
> >
> > Nice abstract. A few suggestions for your consideration.
> >
> > Title: Anisotropic flow of ϕ mesons.... (here and elsewhere)
> > I think FXT is a part of BES program. So you don't have to separate
> > BES
> > and FXT. Also you can mention the beam energy that you will be
> > reporting
> > here and also in the main text.
> >
> > line 8-9: ... and has a small hadronic interaction cross-section,
> > which
> > reduces the influence of late stage rescattering in heavy-ion
> > collisions.
> >
> > line 10: ... is sensitive to the early stages of the collisions and
> > is
> > an important observable for the study of ....
> >
> > line 16: You already have BES defined in line-13. So BES-I should
> > work
> > here.
> >
> > Thanks and regards,
> > Subhash
> >
> > On 2022-06-22 09:47 AM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Ding Chen (dchen087 AT ucr.edu) has submitted a material for a
> > review,
> > > please
> > > have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60017
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