STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Gaoguo,

Thanks a lot for the updated proceedings. I have a few additional 
suggestions for your consideration:

line 31: charge distributions. (?)
line 39: backward rapidities
line 43: GeV/c
line 44: except for
line 45: by using separately negative and positive tracks, and by 
varying track selections.
line 47: remove "in addition". You can say something like, The shape and 
size of initial state fluctuations can contribute to the higher 
harmonics (vn 48 for n=3,4,...) and to the fluctuation of mean 
transverse momentum of final state particles, respectively.
line 56: we also present
line 58: to probe it's beam energies dependence.
line 64: implying a stronger flow decorrelation
line 65-66: The second order decorrelation becomes stronger as we move 
from central to peripheral collisions. Such a dependence is the result 
of ....
line 67: which is dominated by the initial ...
line 69: no obvious centrality dependence since the third order flow is 
...
line 74: which same as observed in isobar ...
line 75: "The decreasing trend" --> Can you call it slope of r{eta}
line 76: lower energy collisions has large decorrelation
line 78: along the longitudinal direction
line 85: and shows a hint of
line 90: similar initial fluctuations

I sign off with these are addressed.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash


On 2022-07-25 11:26 AM, gyan wrote:
> Dear Subhash,
>
> Thanks for your suggestions. Please find a new version from the link 
> below:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/v4_1.pdf
>
> Best,
> Gaoguo Yan
>
> 在 2022-07-22 17:52，subhash via Star-fcv-l 写道：
> > Dear Gaoguo,
> >
> > Thanks for writing the proceedings. I have embedded my suggestions
> > into the following pdf file at:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/v3_1_SS.pdf
> > In the next iteration, please do a latex spell check and get it read
> > by someone from your institute. It probably need to be sharpened a
> > bit.
> >
> > Thanks and regards,
> > Subhash
> >
> > On 2022-07-19 04:51 PM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Gaoguo Yan (gaoguo.yan AT Outlook.com) has submitted a material for a 
> > > review,
> > > please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60322
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