STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

["Adams, Joseph R." <adams.1940 AT buckeyemail.osu.edu>]

Hi Subhash,

Thanks for the comments; I've uploaded the edited draft. 

I agree that it would be nice to have a figure, but I'm very tight on space considering all of the different results that need to be discussed. I would also argue it's not that necessary in my case, because (1) many of the results being discussed are shown in posters and have plots shown in others' proceedings, and (2) the stuff not shown in others' posters include the 3 GeV result which is published already and the splitting "results" at 19.6 and 27 GeV which include a second preliminary (oops!!) and will be irrelevant as soon as the actual results are published. If you or others feel strongly, though, I'm open to including them.

Best,

- Joey

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Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Joseph Adams for Quark Matter 2022 submitted for review

 

Dear Joey,

Very nicely written proceedings and I enjoy reading it. I have a few
comments for your consideration:

In general, we include physics figures in the proceedings, especially
new measurements. I understand there are substantial number figures and
you probably try to avoid it due to page limit.

The abstract can be shortened a bit.

line 77: these discussions (?)

line 82: mass-square information

line 84: "a series of conditions" --> You could mention
KFP/helix/topology cuts and/or refer to previous studies.

line. 85: quite pure --> You could add typical purity achieved.

line 90: double the resolution --> Do you mean Psi1?

line 95: how about saying traditional invariant mass-method?

line 154: you could mention "within uncertainties."

line 167: I don't understand what do you mean by "there also recover the
familiar differential dependencies." You could rephrase it.

line 176: voriticity formation within the medium formed in heavy ion
collisions.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash



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