STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Zhiwan,
  Your talk draft looks very good. Please consider my comments below. 
With these included I sign off your talk.

slide#2: "Chiral Magnetic Effects" -> "Chiral Magnetic Effect"

slide#2: "cos(\phi_1 - 3\phi_2 + 2\Psi)" --> "cos(\phi_1 - 3\phi_2 + 
2\Psi_RP)"

Optional comment but this will improve the clarity:
I think we should replace \Psi with \Psi_RP on slide#2 and later on 
specify that you use \Psi_2 or \Psi_1 from EPDs.

And then somewhere you can add:
"We use three proxies for \Psi_RP
\Psi_RP = \Psi_2 (TPC, 0.55<|\eta|<1)
\Psi_RP = \Psi_2 (EPDs, 2.1<|\eta|<3.4)
\Psi_RP = \Psi_1 (EPDs, 3.8<|\eta|<5.1)"

slide#3: "ESS" --> "Event Shape Selection (ESS)"

slide#4: What you call as pair is not clear. Here are some suggestions:
 "two particle's momenta" --> "momenta of any two particles to mimic the 
resonance decay kinematics: p(pair) = p(track 1) + p(track 2)"

slide#6: "non-flows in peripheral events are" --> "short-range nonflow 
contribution is significantly"

slide#9: Minor revision necessary:
"In aid with EPD, non-flow background in \Delta\gamma_{ESS}^{112} are 
suppressed" --> "We use EPD in aid of nonflow background suppression in 
\Delta\gamma_{ESS}^{112}"

slide#11: "non-flow" --> "nonflow", "contribute" --> "contribute to"

slide#12:
"Event shape selection successfully suppressed v_2 related backgrounds" 
--> "We demonstrate that event shape selection (ESS) approach 
substantially suppresses (by ~70%) v_2 related backgrounds"

It is not clear what you mean by this sentence:
"With POI from TPC, EPD EPs are effective for shape selection to search 
for CME"
How about:
"The choice of POI from TPC and EPD EPs is very effective for ESS to 
search for CME"



Best,
Prithwish


On 2022-10-20 21:40, Zhiwan Xu wrote:
> Dear Conveners and all,
>  Please find my latest version of DNP2022 slides under the node:
>  https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/61315
>  Comments are warmly welcomed. Thank you.
>
> Best,
> Zhiwan
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