STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Gaoguo,
 The abstract looks good. Please consider the following comments. With 
these included, I sign-off your talk.

"on the initial conditions" --> "on the three-dimensional structure of 
the initial stages"

"size of the longitudinal flow de-correlation[1-3]"
-->
"amount of the longitudinal flow de-correlation with pseudorapidity 
**ADD SPACE**[1-3]"

line 13: remove "evolution of"

Best,
Prithwish



On 2023-02-13 21:32, gyan via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Dear Subhash,
>
> Thanks for your suggestions. I already revised and uploaded into
> original link. Thanks again.
>
> Best regards,
> Gaoguo Yan
>
>
> 在 2023-02-13 21:57，subhash via Star-fcv-l 写道：
> > Dear Gaoguo,
> >
> > Nice abstract. I sign off with a few minor suggestions for your 
> > consideration:
> >
> > line 5: can provide
> > line 7: You could a reference of the paper for r_\eta
> > line 8:  longitudinal flow de-correlation
> > line 10: 19.6, 27 and 54.4 GeV
> > line 10-11: we measured ... --> we will present the centrality,
> > collision energy and system size dependence of ...
> > line 11: These results can provide new insights into ...
> >
> > Thanks and regards,
> > Subhash
> >
> > On 2023-02-10 02:51 PM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Gaoguo Yan (gaoguo.yan AT Outlook.com) has submitted a material for a 
> > > review,
> > > please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/62495
> > >
> > > Deadline: 2023-02-28
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