STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Shengli,

Nice abstract. I have a few wording suggestions for your consideration:

either "evolves in the collisions of small-size systems" or, "evolves in 
the small collision systems"

"the uncertainties in the description of initial geometry ...."

"collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV in STAR."

"With the advantage of wide rapidity coverage of the Time Projection 
Chamber (-1< η <1), the flow coefficients are extracted via di-hadron 
correlations at mid-pseudorapidity and ..."

"The kinematics of our measurements can help avoid decorrelation and 
provide a benchmark to compare with boost-invariant models."

"on the initial geometry in small collision systems."

I sign off with these addressed.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2023-02-28 01:10 AM, Shengli Huang via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Dear Prithwish,
>     Thanks for the comments. I update the abstract with your comments.
>
> Thanks
> Shengli
>
> On Mon, Feb 27, 2023 at 2:32 PM Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l
> <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
> > Hi Shengli,
> > Nice abstract. Here are my comments. With these included, I
> > sign-off
> > your talk.
> >
> > heavy ion --> heavy-ion
> > uncertaities --> uncertainties
> >
> > This sentence may require some revising:
> > "of initial geometry due to the internal nucleonic structure and
> > its fluctuations"
> > How about:
> > "associated with the description of initial geometry and
> > fluctuations at
> > the sub-nucleonic scale"
> >
> > "final measurements" --> "measurements"
> >
> > "coverage of" --> "coverage of the"
> >
> > "both in the mid-rapidity and" --> "at mid-rapidity using a relative
> >
> > pseudorapidity separation of"
> >
> > "It will avoid" --> "The kinematics of our measurements help avoid"
> >
> > "dynamics contribution" --> "decorrelation"
> >
> > "nucleonic or sub-nucleonic" --> "nucleonic vs. sub-nucleonic (?)"
> >
> > Best,
> > Prithwish
> >
> > On 2023-02-27 07:28, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > > Shengli Huang (shengli.huang AT stonybrook.edu) has submitted a
> > material
> > > for a
> > > review, please have a look:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/62823
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