STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[zhchen <zhchen AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Niseem,

Nice abstract. I sign off with few comments for you to consider.
Title: "for the heavy ion collisions' initial state" -> "for initial 
state of heavy-ion collisions"
Line 2: "a weak" -> "its weak"
Line 3: "state in" -> "state of"
Line 8: "for, " -> "for"

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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