STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Shengli Huang <shengli.huang AT stonybrook.edu>]

Dear Subhash,

    Thanks for the comments. The suggestions are implemented in the updated version.

Regards

Shengli

On Mon, Feb 27, 2023 at 11:21 PM subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Shengli,

Nice abstract. I have a few wording suggestions for your consideration:

either "evolves in the collisions of small-size systems" or, "evolves in
the small collision systems"

"the uncertainties in the description of initial geometry ...."

"collisions at √sNN = 200 GeV in STAR."

"With the advantage of wide rapidity coverage of the Time Projection
Chamber (-1< η <1), the flow coefficients are extracted via di-hadron
correlations at mid-pseudorapidity and ..."

"The kinematics of our measurements can help avoid decorrelation and
provide a benchmark to compare with boost-invariant models."

"on the initial geometry in small collision systems."

I sign off with these addressed.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2023-02-28 01:10 AM, Shengli Huang via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Dear Prithwish,
>     Thanks for the comments. I update the abstract with your comments.
>
> Thanks
> Shengli
>
> On Mon, Feb 27, 2023 at 2:32 PM Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l
> <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
>
>> Hi Shengli,
>> Nice abstract. Here are my comments. With these included, I
>> sign-off
>> your talk.
>>
>> heavy ion --> heavy-ion
>> uncertaities --> uncertainties
>>
>> This sentence may require some revising:
>> "of initial geometry due to the internal nucleonic structure and
>> its fluctuations"
>> How about:
>> "associated with the description of initial geometry and
>> fluctuations at
>> the sub-nucleonic scale"
>>
>> "final measurements" --> "measurements"
>>
>> "coverage of" --> "coverage of the"
>>
>> "both in the mid-rapidity and" --> "at mid-rapidity using a relative
>>
>> pseudorapidity separation of"
>>
>> "It will avoid" --> "The kinematics of our measurements help avoid"
>>
>> "dynamics contribution" --> "decorrelation"
>>
>> "nucleonic or sub-nucleonic" --> "nucleonic vs. sub-nucleonic (?)"
>>
>> Best,
>> Prithwish
>>
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