STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[zhchen <zhchen AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Hi Qiang,

Nice abstract. I have the following suggestions for you to consider:
line 11: remove "interactions"; "these" -> "those"
line 12: "relative" -> "compared"; remove "late-stage", it is ambiguous
line 14: remove "and...interest"; add "On the other hand," before 
"recent"
line 15: remove "also"
line 18-21: remove the sentences inside brackets
line 24: remove "sets"
line 27: remove "RHIC BES-II"
line 30: "reveal" -> "to reveal"; remove "late-stage"
line 31: "as well as" -> "and to"

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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