STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Prithwish Tribedy <ptribedy AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Zuowen and all,
 Thank you for taking my comments into consideration. Could you please 
make the following modification to avoid repeating the word "enhanced":

"utilizing the enhanced capabilities of the STAR detector and enhanced 
statistics datasets"

-->

"utilizing the enhanced capabilities of the STAR detector and increased 
statistics datasets"

Best,
Prithwish




On 2023-04-22 21:53, Zuowen Liu wrote:
> Dear Prithwish and All,
>
> Thank you so much for your nice suggestions.
> After re-shaping the abstract, the logic of abstract is more clear and
> the focus is more prominent.
>
> Kindly find the updated version by the link:
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2023_Abstract_Flow_Merged_0.pdf
>
> Thanks and Best regards,
> Zuowen
>
> ------------------ Original ------------------
>
> From:  "Prithwish Tribedy via Star-fcv-l"<star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;
> Date:  Sun, Apr 23, 2023 03:28 AM
> To:  "star-fcv-l"<star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;
>
> Subject:  Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Zuowen Liu for Quark
> Matter 2023 submitted for review
>
> Dear Zuowen, Priyanshi, Li-ke and Prabhupada,
>
> Very nice abstract! The version 1 is already in a very good shape. The
>
> first para can be made a bit more cohesive but the current version is
> still effective. Here are some minor comments:
>
> "Equation of State (EoS)"-->"equation of state (EoS)" (I think)
>
> "complementary information" --> "valuable information"
>
> After this line ending with "....transport properties of the medium."
> add a line as follows:
> "Studying these flow harmonics for various identified particles at
> different energies provides insights on a medium going through QCD
> phase
> transition."
>
> "early stage" -->"early stages"
>
> "may provide" --> "making them cleaner probe to provide"
>
> Basically you can change this sentence:
> "(Multi-)strange hadrons with small hadronic cross-sections may
> provide
> information primarily from the early stage of the heavy-ion collisions
>
> and are
> important for the study of the QCD phase diagram at RHIC."
> -->
> "In particular, multi-strange hadrons with small hadronic
> cross-sections
> are cleaner probes of the early stages of heavy-ion collisions"
>
> And the following as the last sentence of the first paragraph:
> "A comparative study of light and multi-strange hadrons provides
> valuable insights into the subsequent stages of the medium evolution."
>
> For line 10-13, revise the sentence as follows:
> In this talk, the measurements of v1,v2 and v3 for both light and
> (multi-)strange hadrons at √sNN = 3.0, 3.2, 3.5, 3.9, 7.7, 9.2,
> 11.5,
> 14.6, and 19.6 GeV , utilizing the enhanced capabilities of the STAR
> detector and enhanced statistics datasets from the second phase of the
>
> RHIC beam energy scan (BES-II) program, will be presented.
>
> Best,
> Prithwish
>
> On 2023-04-16 23:25, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> > Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> >
> > Zuowen Liu (liuzw AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a
> > review,
> > please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63392
> >
> > Deadline: 2023-05-01
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