STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally 
 
submitted by Xionghong He ( hexh AT impcas.ac.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Light-and-Hyper-Nuclei-Collectivity-AuAu-Collisions-RHIC

Comment:
Second round of comments:
"$v_2$ elliptic flow" --> "elliptic flow $v_2$
"with the fixed-target mode" -- >"in the fixed-target mode"
"We observe that the slope" --> "We also observe that the slope"
"framework of the hadronic transport model" --> "framework of the hadronic  
transport models" (if you're going to show multiple models) or "framework of  
a hadronic transport model" (if you're going to show one model)

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