STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally 
 
submitted by Eddie (Emmy) Duckworth ( educkwor AT kent.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Directed-Flow-Protons-and-Anti-Protons-RHIC-Beam-Energy-Scan-II

Comment:
Nice abstract! A few minor comments.
Please add you name, "for the STAR collaboration" and your institution name.
"Directed Flow of Protons and Anti-Protons in RHIC Beam Energy Scan II"
-->
"Directed Flow of Protons and Anti-Protons from RHIC Beam Energy Scan II from 
 
STAR"

"net proton" --> "net-proton"

"We will present" --> "we will present"
I think you should replace "to ~10 GeV" -->"to 9.2 GeV"
"and EoS" --> "and the EoS"
"implications to the understanding" --> "the implications for the  
understanding"


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