STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally 
 
submitted by Guoping Wang (  gpwang AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/elliptic-flow-multi-strange-hadrons-Au-Au-collisions-sqrtsNN77-and-9

Comment:
Nice abstract. Here are my minor comments.
"The elliptic flow, $v_2$," -->"The elliptic flow ($v_2$)"
"azimuthal distribution" --> "azimuthal distribution of produced particles"
"early stage of the collision" -->"early stages of the collision"
"Thus, the elliptic flow" --> "Thus $v_2$"
I would suggest you re-write the beginning of line 5 as follows:
"Thus, the elliptic flow of (multi-)strange hadrons" --> "Thus, a comparative 
 
study of various strange and multi-strange hadrons"
"explore" --> "better explore"
"Beam Energy Scan from STAR(BES-II)" --> "RHIC Beam Energy Scan (BES-II)"
"7.7 and 9.2 GeV" --> "7.7 and 9.2 GeV using the STAR detector"
"and collision centrality" --> "and with collision centrality"
"Quarks(NCQ)" --> "Quarks (NCQ)"
I think you should change "Number of Constituent Quarks" to lower cases.
"to QCD phase" -->"to the QCD phase"



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