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Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally  
submitted by Vipul Bairathi ( vipul.bairathi AT gmail.com ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/ICNFP-2023/Elliptic-flow-measurements-strange-and-multi-strange-hadrons-isobar-collisi

Comment:
Hi Vipul,

Nice abstract. I sign off with few suggestions to shape the abstract more  
friendly to non-experts.
- line 8: "contribution" -> "contributions"; "possibly small CME signal" ->  
"possible Chiral Magnetic Effects in heavy ion collisions"
- line 9: "QGP medium" -> "Quark-Gluon Plasma"
- line 18: "this statistically hungry measurement" -> "these statistically  
hungry measurements"

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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