STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Dear Baoshan,

Nice abstract. I have a few additional suggestions for your 
consideration:

"AuAu and Isobar" --> Au+Au and Isobar (Zr+Zr and Ru+Ru)

"the novel phenomena observed" --> Please specify the novel phenomena 
you are referring to, I guess CME. You could also define CME here.

"While the global spin alignment for φ particles is argued to be 
sensitive to the local fluctuations of the strong force field[1], the 
global spin alignment of ρ0 mesons can effectively influence the 
measured Chiral Magnetic Effect"
--> I would suggest to split this line into two. First say our spin 
alignment observations at RHIC. Then say that the global spin alignment 
of vector mesons can effectively influence CME observable. I wouldn't 
specify \rho meson here in this line. I believe it is true for all 
vector mesons. It is more prominent for \rho because of its abundant 
decay to pions.

"can effectively influence the measured Chiral Magnetic Effect" --> can 
influence CME-sensitive observables


Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2023-06-06 05:35 AM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
> Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
>
> Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material 
> originally
> submitted by Baoshan Xi ( xibaoshan AT sinap.ac.cn ) at
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/SPIN-2023/Global-spin-alignment-rho0-meson-AuAu-and-Isobar-200-GeV
>
> Comment:
> Hi Baoshan,
>
> Nice abstract. Next time please try to include line numbers. I sign off 
> with
> few suggestions
> - line2: phi particles -> phi meson
> - line4: measured Chiral Magnetic Effect -> Chiral Magnetic Effect
> measurements
> - line5: negative -> negatively
> - line6: signs -> sign
> - line7: for interpreting CME observables -> for the interpretation of 
> CME
> observables; measurement -> measurements
> - line8: spin alignment for AuAu -> spin alignment for rho meson in 
> AuAu; as
> a function -> as functions
>
> PS: please try to delete the duplicated drupal entry.
>
> Cheers,
> Zhenyu
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