STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

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Prithwish Tribedy ( ptribedy AT bnl.gov ) has commented on a material originally 
 
submitted by Yufu Lin ( yufulin AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Chirality-Workshop-2023/Search-Chiral-Magnetic-Effect-Forced-Match-Multiplicity-and--0

Comment:
Nice slides! A few minor comments for you to include in the next version.

General: Slide numbers are missing.

slide#3:
"differences between isobars system two systems can observed" -->
"differences between isobars system two systems can be observed in models"

Slide#4:
"No pre-defined signature" --> "No pre-defined signature (Ratio >1)"

Slide#5:
"match Ru+Ru" --> "match the Ru+Ru distribution"

slide#8:
Fix the text going outside of the slides

slide#12:
Use a darker shade of cyan to write "STAR Preliminary Forced Match"
On the x-axis "\Delta \gamma_112 /v_2" --> "(\Delta \gamma_112 /v_2) EP, TPC"

Slide#13:
"The ratio of \Delta \delta" is larger" --> "The ratio of \Delta \delta" is  
larger even after forced match"

Is this pT plot before or after forced matching? You don't indicate  
"(matched)" on the plot. Is this a typo?
Do you have pT after forced matching?
If "The ratio of Δδ" is larger, then what matters is pT after the forced  
matching, not before.

Slide#14:
If you want to present this slide, please correct the text overlap at the  
bottom of the slide.





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