STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

["Feng, Yicheng" <feng216 AT purdue.edu>]

Hi Subhash,

Thank you for your nice comments.

I followed all of them and modified the poster accordingly. 

The revised poster has been uploaded to the same node

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64333

or directly to the poster https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/AUM2023Poster_YichengFeng_v6.pdf

Please let me know if you have any further comments. 

Sincerely,

Yicheng

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Dear Yicheng,

Very nice poster. I sign off with a few minor suggestions:

Title: spin measurements --> spin polarization
Abstract: "This paper reports" --> This poster reports

Under section 2:
can you please rephrase _drops_ in correlation....
I am not sure I understand the meaning of it.

Under section 3: You can label "summary" before the bullets
It is not clear which are those quantities in the line "We calculate
those individual quantities ...", may be  you can be specify.

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

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