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From: subhash <subhash AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>
To: "STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG" <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Cc: 韩成栋 <chdhan AT impcas.ac.cn>, webmaster AT star.bnl.gov
Subject: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Chengdong Han for Quark Matter 2023 got commented by Zhenyu Chen
Date: Mon, 28 Aug 2023 15:14:31 +0800

Dear Chengdong,

Very nice slides. I also have a few additional suggestions for your consideration:

s#4: high baryon chemical potential

s#5: "which is considered to be a sensitive observation quantity for studying EoS;" --> which is a sensitive observable for studying EoS;
could you rephrase the 2nd bullet? What do you mean by "two differential images"?

s#7: table top row: 2018 3.0 GeV (3.59 A GeV) --> 3.0 GeV (3.59 A GeV) (2018)
Events --> Is it no. of good/analyzed events? Please make sure these numbers are consistent with others.

TPC-AB, EPD-CD ... will not be understood by audience outside STAR, please indicate eta ranges for reach regions in the slide.

s#10: "where p0, which stands for the..." --> where p0 is the ...

At given energy, for both light- and hyper-nuclei, it seems that the slopes of mid-rapidity v1 are scaled with atomic mass number A or/and particle mass;

s#12: Correct the typo: "mean field" (also in next slides)
.... calculations are consistent ...

s#14: 2nd bullet, how about: <pT> of light and hyper-nuclei: both data and model show similar the mass dependence

s#15: First observation --> Observation
It implies coalescence as dominant mechanism for nuclei formation

Thanks and regards,
Subhash

On 2023-08-23 03:25 PM, 韩成栋 via Star-fcv-l wrote:

Dear Zhenyu

Many thanks for your kind comments.
I have implemented them with your suggestions into my slides.
Please kindly find the updated report by the link:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Light-and-Hyper-Nuclei-Collectivity-AuAu-Collisions-RHIC-STAR

Thank you for your attention.

Best wishes,

Chengdong Han

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> Comment:
> Dear Chengdong,
>
> Nice slides. Please find few suggestions below:
> - General: please try to keep title of each slide at the same
position and
> same font size
> - Slide2: mass and energy dependence -> mass and energy
dependence of v_1
> - Slide2: v_2 results -> v_2
> - Slide3: remove the ":" after "scan"
> - Slide4: bullet point 1), "high density" or high chemical potential?
> - Slide5: size of v_n -> magnitude of v_n
> - Slide5: observed flow coefficients -> observed flow coefficients v_n^R
> - Slide5: corrected -> correct
> - Slide6: enlarge -> enlarged; improve -> improved; enhance
-> enhanced
> - Slide7: centrality cut table is not needed; the references
refer to star
> internal files should not be there; re-centering -> re-center; three
> sub-events method, I would suggest to provide the equation
> - Slide8: errors -> uncertainties; help us to -> help us on
> - Slide9: add few words on the key points you want to deliver from this
> slide; what are the yellow boxes in acceptance plots?
> - Slide10: add few words
> - Slide14: I did not get the meaning of this sentence "Light- and
> Hyper-nuclei, as well as ..."
> - Slide15: particle mass -> particles' mass; dominant -> dominating
>
> Cheers,
> Zhenyu
>
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