STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

["Duckworth, Emilie" <educkwor AT kent.edu>]

Grazyna,

Because the 7.7 GeV centrality definition was only so recently approved I was not able to have the proper 7.7 GeV datapoint on the excess proton flow plot until now. I have now updated it. Also, do I need STAR preliminary status for that plot for Quark Matter?

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Directed-Flow-Protons-and-Anti-Protons-RHIC-Beam-Energy-Scan-II-0

Emmy

Emmy

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From: Grazyna Odyniec <g_odyniec AT lbl.gov>
Sent: Monday, August 28, 2023 10:12 PM
To: Duckworth, Emilie <educkwor AT kent.edu>; star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Subject: Re: EXT: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Eddie (Emmy) Duckworth for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

 

Dear Emmy,

Thank you very much for incorporating my suggestions.

I have no further comments.

Best regards,

Grazyna



On 8/28/23 11:22 AM, Duckworth, Emilie wrote:
> Hello Grazyna,
>
> I have addressed the issues you brought up. Please see the updated
> submission.
>
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Directed-Flow-Protons-and-Anti-Protons-RHIC-Beam-Energy-Scan-II-0
>
>
> Emmy
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> Grazyna Odyniec via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
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> *Cc:* Grazyna Odyniec <g_odyniec AT lbl.gov>
> *Subject:* EXT: Re: [Star-fcv-l] STAR presentation by Eddie (Emmy)
> Duckworth for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review
> Hi Eddie,
>
> I was asked by STAR management to review a few posters for QM, and yours
> is one of them.
>
> Here are my comments for your consideration.
>
> First of all – congratulations on the very nice and clear poster. Well
> done!
>
> A few (minor) remarks follow:
>
> Abstract
>
> Line 4:
>
> Net proton -> net-proton
>
> Line 4-5:
>
> You definitely need to say that this non-monotonic behavior (from BES-I
> data) is observed at mid-rapidity. It is important, because you are
> talking about contribution of the transported quarks to mid-y
>
> Line-6:
>
>  From STAR -> from STAR experiment (or even better -> from STAR
> experiment at RHIC)
>
> Summary slide:
>
> References for both JAM model versions would be useful. You can put them
> on the figure directly or into the “References” (left bottom)
>
>
> The figure with Excess shows for the first time the centrality range of
> Au+Au collisions in your analysis. I would suggest mentioning this
> earlier, for example you could do it in the Abstract in line 5:
>
> We will present measurements of the directed flow of protons and
> antiprotons from 19.6, 14.5, and 7.7 GeV Au+Au collisions, using …
>
> ->
>
> We will present measurements of the directed flow of protons and
> antiprotons collision from 19.6, 14.5, and 7.7 GeV semi-central (10-40%)
> Au+Au collisions, using …
>
>
> Best regards,
>
> Grazyna Odyniec / LBNL
>
>
> On 8/25/23 9:42 AM, webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l wrote:
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> >
> > Eddie (Emmy) Duckworth (educkwor AT kent.edu) has submitted a material
> for a
> > review, please have a look:
> > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64887
> >
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