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Subhash Singha ( connectsubhash AT gmail.com ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Han-Sheng Li ( li3924 AT purdue.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/ESE-delta-gamma-vs-invariant-mass-AuAu-collisions-200GeV

Comment:
Hi Han-Sheng, Nice poster. A few minor suggestions: Check the subscript: c_1, 
 
c_2; Right figure on analysis procedure, what does B stands for in q2,B, you  
can probably indicate A,B sub-events in the cartoon above;  Systematic  
uncertainty section: we usually don't mention the technicalities, eg what  
nHItsFit mean to a non-expert; It is not sure how systematic error is  
combined from different variations, mention of Barlow doesn't help in that  
sense; Do you mean 1.5𝜎 significance?; The left middle plot in the result  
section, you can indicate Psi_2 or psi_TPC; Suggest switch ordering first  
conclusion, then Future Steps;

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