STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

["Zuowen Liu" <liuzw AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Dear Zhenyu,

I am very appreciate for your nice suggestions. I have implemented them into the slides.

Kindly find the updated slides by the link:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Anisotropic-Flow-Identified-Particles-Au-Au-Collisions-3-%E2%80%93-196-GeV

Thanks and Best regards,

Zuowen

 

 

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Date:  Sat, Sep 2, 2023 11:30 PM

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Subject:  STAR presentation got a comment

 

Dear Zuowen Liu,

Zhenyu Chen (zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn) has commented on your submission:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Anisotropic-Flow-Identified-Particles-Au-Au-Collisions-3-%E2%80%93-196-GeV

Comments:
Dear Zuowen,

Much better! I sign off with few suggestions:
- Slide4: , give -> and provide
- Slide7: is there a reference for KFParticle? if so please add it; decay 
particles -> decayed particles
- Slide8: would be better to move fitting function and range into the 
figures, next to "slope = ..."; with pT -> at pT
- Slide9: I don't think you need the "Note" here as no fitting shown on this 
slide; Related posters -> See also posters
- Slide10: reproduced -> reproduces
- Slide11: in the magnitude -> in magnitude
- Slide13&14: roles -> role
- Slide16: keep the indent for every line
- Slide17: dataset -> data

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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