STAR Flow, Chirality and Vorticity PWG

[Gavin Wilks <gwilks3 AT uic.edu>]

Dear Convenors,

I have made the updates to my slides.

Best,

Gavin

On Sep 21, 2023, at 18:16, Gavin Wilks <gwilks3 AT uic.edu> wrote:

Dear convenors,

I will have some updates to my slides by later tomorrow if you could look over the slides again before approval. I will send an email when they are ready.

Best,

Gavin

On Thu, Sep 21, 2023 at 09:21 webmaster--- via Star-fcv-l <star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear star-fcv-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Zhenyu Chen ( zhenyuchen AT sdu.edu.cn ) has commented on a material originally 
submitted by Gavin Wilks ( gwilks3 AT uic.edu ) at
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Comment:
Dear Gavin,

Nice slides. I sign off with few suggestions:
- Slide8: Motivation -> STAR BESII
- Slide10: Analysis Method -> rho_00 Extraction
- Slide11&12&13&14: in the titles, x dependent -> x-dependent
- Slide15: the first bullet point needs to point out the collisions system

Cheers,
Zhenyu

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